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Some days are for living.
Some days are for dying.
Someday I will fly away.
Like a butterfly.

I am waiting for your embrace.
But you leave me cold.
I give you back the neckglace.
I'll take the gold.
To be honest I didn't want to hurt you.
Maybe you didn't want me.

*I feel like you are watching
Over me everywhere.
Even now that you're dead.
You're following me everywhere.
Please, stop the war before it is too late.
Leave me alone.
Or am I paranoid?

Use the energy for living
Don't waste it to war.
Thanks for giving
back what is mine.

I am already a golden statue.
Gold outside and cold inside.
I never meant to take your friends
Away from you.
I loved you more than anything
I still do...

**I just don't think you are dead yet.
I am not a boy yet a man.
Giving signs to nowhere.
Lead me astray.
Am I paranoid too?

September looks May on your face.
Don't deceive, deceive deceive me anymore.
I beg you.
I ask you.
I order you.
But it's not working.

*(repeat)

Don't kill my privacy.

**(repeat)

Now I am gone too
©2008-2009 ~Gassevelle
:icongassevelle:

Author's Comments

This is a new one. No more mistakes. Thanks for vasssen.

This is for you.

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:iconvasssen:
So very beautiful.
Especially;

"I never meant to take your friends
Away from you.
I loved you more than anything
I still do..."

Thank you, my friend.

--
Two realities, two mes.
:icongassevelle:
You are welcome. ^^

--
Real Friends are treasure you won't lose <3
:iconratafluke:
Sounds so desperate, especially these lines:

I beg you.
I ask you.
I order you.
But it's not working.

Makes me go cold inside.

--
A wanderer in darkness, waiting for the misty morning fog :blackrose:
... and a deviant who returns comments ;]
-> If you comment me I'll comment back :]


My split personality:
=Ratafluke - Photography
~Nebelstreif - Poetry
:icongassevelle:
Maybe it's goof that ppl feel something inside when they read those :)

--
Real Friends are treasure you won't lose <3
:iconratafluke:
Yea, I think that's a characteristic of good art, that it moves you :]

--
A wanderer in darkness, waiting for the misty morning fog :blackrose:
... and a deviant who returns comments ;]
-> If you comment me I'll comment back :]


My split personality:
=Ratafluke - Photography
~Nebelstreif - Poetry
:icongassevelle:
heh thank you ^^

--
Real Friends are treasure you won't lose <3
:iconxxemoxchildxx:
beautiful.... it sounds a little desprate.... but still good....

--
nemo me imune lacessit
:icongassevelle:
yay thanks for the comment

--
Real Friends are treasure you won't lose <3
:iconxxemoxchildxx:
welcome...

--
nemo me imune lacessit

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